fwdmotionx5

from the heart

~ by fwdmotionx5

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from the heart

~ by fwdmotionx5

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He is no fool who gives what he cannot keep, to gain that which he cannot lose.

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designer says...

For out of the overflow of the heart the mouth speaks.-matt 12:34. what is in your heart is what is poured out into your life. your mouth revelas what's insde your heart

TALK — blah, blah

littlecynicism

It looks, to me, like a vbs shirt. Maybe, if you took off the text and added some detail to those hearts it would work...

~ by littlecynicism
3 months ago
lightmanx5

@littlecynicism Wow, you must have some really sweet looking VBS shirts!

~JOSh-X

~ by lightmanx5
3 months ago
hyperjen

i would wear it

~ by hyperjen
3 months ago
rainmemories

@lightmanx5 I agree, I want to know where that VBS is, I need to go, apparently for the fun shirts. I like it.

~ by rainmemories
3 months ago
littlecynicism

Maybe on a different color? I think it looks like a kid would wear it. I wouldn't.

~ by littlecynicism
3 months ago
AnterDemi

I voted. Mmhmm.

~ by AnterDemi
3 months ago
cddude

great statement, it just kind of seems backwards.. instead of "speaking" coming out of the heart, hearts are coming out of a speaking device.

~ by cddude
3 months ago
californiaglow4

i love it, it's great...I need one........love the megaphone....speaks really loud

~ by californiaglow4
3 months ago
fwdmotionx5

@cddude thanks for your comment! I see what you're saying, but I think what I'm trying to say is that your mouth reveals your heart-so what you say (what comes out of your megaphone) is your heart

~ by fwdmotionx5
3 months ago
lynzmiller

Love it! Can't wait to own one!!

~ by lynzmiller
3 months ago
DDTechGuy

Simple, straightforward, elegant...I'll take four!
DDTG

~ by DDTechGuy
3 months ago
tmgraphics

from the heart the mouth speaks. Bring "the" and "mouth" in a bit.

~ by tmgraphics
3 months ago
tmgraphics

kern, those words seem disconnected

~ by tmgraphics
3 months ago
CindysGraphics

Hearts are love. When Christ fills our hearts with His love, we can't help but pour out the love to others from our heart. The hearts are the love speaking out of our mouths (heart). What is in our hearts comes out of our mouths. It's a good message. Like it.

~ by CindysGraphics
3 months ago
emosamurai

The text for me is what turns me off of this shirt. It looks to formulaic, like you typed it into Word and left aligned it. It needs to either be taken out completely or integrated more into the overall flow of the design.

~ by emosamurai
3 months ago
fwdmotionx5

Am i allowed to fix the text and then submit it again? what about different colors? Can i add those too?

~ by fwdmotionx5
3 months ago
designteam

Hey, fwdmotionx5, this is a cool design. regarding your questions,
1) you can email us at designteam@rediswhite.com and we will change your text description as you wish for your design
2) if you want to change the colors, you could describe that in your description, or you could resubmit a design in new colors (we would have to create that as a new design to be rated all over again. your choice.)
3) remember, that some of our most successful designers are in the good habit of using the critique board at a great site Creativemyk.com to test out design ideas. people comment on them there, and you can get feeback BEFORE you submit to rediswhite.com. We find it to be an awesome opportunity to get feedback from a worldclass design community that helps a design get tweeked to be its best. See the blog by one of the founders gahumbert about the topic. Thanks.

~ by designteam
3 months ago
jodirae

I like the hearts and the text, but not really excited about the mega phone...

~ by jodirae
2 months ago
eleanor_roosevelt

i really like this concept - it's so true, but I feel like there is a disconnect between the styles of the text and the megaphone and the hearts. actually, scratch that - the hearts and the text go well together (the colour helps that, but it's mainly the smooth lines)... it's just the megaphone... with the pop art halftone effect... that seems disjointed. I think the megaphone the strongest part of the design, so bring the font and hearts in line with that

~ by eleanor_roosevelt
16 days ago

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